Wonderful Oar Boat

Wonderful Oar Boat
Do you remember some wonderful experiences you had with either Mom or Dad?

Trout

High mountains
cold and dark against night
Shuffling feet
along heavy planks of pier
Pulling ropes of bow and stern
Tiny boat undulating
to currents of moon-lit waters
Fishing tackle stowed
poles boxes bait
livelings wriggling in sawdust
cheese balls in oil
and dancing metal lures
to sparkle feint and run
Casting off by oar
Pulling at the tiny motor
Rope and crank rope and crank
Choke and rope
Chug sputter chug adjust
sputter whirr
Clanking of metal against metal
Cutting straight toward the deep
into the quiet
A muffled skimming
Waves slapping prow
Ball caps life preservers
coffee soft drinks sandwiches
They are off for the game
of fishing
before sun rising
to drop enticers into deep
running spinners in shallows
They play the game
of reading trout
father and son
and being quite possibly
as close as they
can ever be

Excellent imagery. I love that the short phrases create a “piecey” effect, similar to the way our brain stores memories. And the intimacy of descriptions have a fantastic “macro” effect. Also, those last four lines were a great way to end the poem. Great piece all around. Good job =)

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